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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
My guy if you have me review another character please follow my form because the way you do things is not the way I ask and it really does throw a spanner in the works, especially when I have so many reviews to do. I'll do it this time but next time I won't accept it.
My comments will be in bold.
Basics and grounding
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This is also a my hero academia oc it just wasn't mentioned here.
Character information
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Alright these are some pretty good traits and can work well for a character. But I do suggest adding more detail and developing aspects like his personality and adding more unique traits to his personality.
Relationships
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Okay these work but maybe add more relationships with other people and add more positive traits to these because there are more to most relationships then one notes.
Backstory
This was N/A so definitely add a Backstory and everything.
Other
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This works and there aren't any problems here. It is a bit hard to wrap your head around how his quirk works so maybe phrase is better but apart from that this is pretty well thought out.
Stats This was N/A but definitely figure out some stats because hey act like grounding for characters and it really does help.
Extra
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Didn't ask for this but add more likes and dislikes because there are more then one thing that people like/dislike.
Final thoughts This is a pretty good character but he could do with some more detail and development to make him an even better character. It's always good starting a character off with their quirk, but don't make it so their entire character is shaped around it. Apart from that, good job.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
