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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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Alright so I'm slightly confused why you gave me some of this information twice but some more detailed then others but that's fine.
Now I'm going to tell you everything I tell anyone making a creepypasta character. They are meant to be scary. Your character's appearence doesn't scare me. She sounds like what a normal character would look like. Add some more scary physical traits. Also be careful with dyed hair because it's somewhat frowned upon in the fandom.
With her personality you need to add more detail. Personality should be at least a paragraph instead of just a few words because that way it gives us a lot more insight into how the character acts and how she is. Also all her traits fit into the same type of personality sector so add more complicated and tricky traits to make her more in depth and details.
Also add some more details to her hobbies and be careful with her allias because ones like that are pretty common.
Relationships
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The romance bit is good, but you really need to add more detail to everything else. Like why is she enemies with Zalgo? What's her relationship like with her parents? Stuff like that. Backstory
