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    REQUESTS ARE CLOSED Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...

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    Review 99 // Jeremias Joseff Claudio

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    Here is a review for kriston-
    
                          
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    Basics and grounding 
    
                          
    
                            
    
                                Alright, I see a lot of ocs with no set universe and I'm cool with it, just make sure that it still works and flows correctly
                            
                              
                              
                                
                                  
                                  
                                
                              
                             
                            
    
                            
    
                              
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    Alright, I see a lot of ocs with no set universe and I'm cool with it, just make sure that it still works and flows correctly. 
    
                          
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                                This is pretty well done and I'm impressed with the detail put into his design
                            
                              
                              
                                
                                  
                                  
                                
                              
                             
                            
    
                            
    
                              
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    This is pretty well done and I'm impressed with the detail put into his design. I also like the sound of his personality but be careful it doesn't contradict itself, especially with the sweet but cold thing. It can work if he's cold at first and then becomes sweet but otherwise that doesn't quite work.
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