En Swasa Kaatre

Chapter 1

It was a bliss morning in munnar, Kerala.. the morning rays tried to peep into the curtains which covered the room behind the opened windows. hearing the chirping of birds from the out side, a pair of hands opened the curtains and let the sun shines on his face.. when the cool breeze stroked his face a small smile crept on his lips.. he leaning on the window still his gaze fixed on the morning mist, lost in his own thoughts.. after a while his trace broken by the door knocking sound followed by a voice..

: Morning da Aadhava.. (Aadhavan smiled at his friend Vetri who gave him a coffee cup..)

Aadhavan: morning da..

Vetri: enna da.. adhukula elunthuta.. thungave ilaya nee.. paru evlo tireda iruka..

Aadhavan: ila da.. pudhu edamla adhaa sariya thookam varla..

Vetri: sari na heater on panitu pora.. nee kulichitu keela vaa sapdalam..

(Aadhavan nodded and Vetri left the room, then he went to the washroom and came back after finishing his morning chores and get ready for the day with the new ray of hope.. he went downstairs there his friend's wife arranged all the items in the dinning table..)

V. W: (smiled..) gud morning na.. vanga, ukarunga sapdalam..

Aadhavan: morning ma.. enga avana kanom avanum vanthuratum ma.. onnave saptukalam..

V.W: neega ukarunga na.. avaru kulichitu vanthuruvaru.. neega night um seriya saptruka matinga.. first neega vanga..

(She made him sat on the chair and served him idli with sambar and chatni.. in the mean time Vetri also joined them..)

Vetri: dei macha.. andha photola irunthathu sathiyama namma sandhya ve dhan da.. nee sonathuku apratha adha nane kavanicha..

V.W: aama na.. unga guess correct tha.. enaku kuda avangala engayo patha mari tha iruku.. avanga potruka dress vechi pakum bothu avanga inga tour vantha mari therila.. ingaye irukravanga maritha iruku.. kavala padathinga anna.. na enoda friends ellar kitayum solli vechiruka.. kandipa avanga sekiram kedaichiruvanga..

Aadhavan: andha nambikaila tha ma naanum inga kelambi vandhuruka..

Vetri: unga rendu per manasuku ellame nallatha nadakum da nee sapdu..

(They continued their eating.. after completing Breakfast, they settled in the living..)

Aadhavan: macha.. inga unaku therijavanga yar kitayavathu kettu pakalama.. avanga yaravathu ithuku munadi inga avala pathuruka chance irukula..

Vetri: nee mundhanethu call pannapaye na enaku therinjavanga, pakkathu veetukaranga elar kitayum visarichitan da.. ellarume therilanu tha sonanga.. nama vena indha area police station la oru complaint kuduthuralama.. avanga easya kandu pudichiruvanga..

Aadhavan: ila adhulam vena da.. ava enna situationla irukanu therila.. theva ilama nama complaint lam kuduthu avala kasta padutha vena..

Vetri: dei.. nee enna nenaikira, thangachi vera oru life ku move on agirupana.. Nane naraya thadava ava kannula un mela ava vechiruka kadhala pathuruka da.. kandipa ipavum ava una matumtha nenachitu irupa.. nee bayapdatha..

Aadhavan: na adha solala da.. enoda edathula la vera yarayum avalala yosichi kuda pakka mudiyathunu enaku nalla theriyum.. ithana varushama nanum avalum pesikalaye thavira enga manasu epayum onna than da irunthuruku, aana ethuku police lam vechi avala bayamuruthanum adhuku tha vendanu soldra.. nane avala epdiyavathu thedi kandu pudichiruvan da.. enaku andha nambika iruku..

Vetri: sari da.. officiala vendam.. enoda friend oruthan intha area station la tha SI aa irukan.. avankita na already itha pathi pesiruka.. unofficial la avana konja help panna soli ketruka.. adhu unaku ok thana..

Aadhavan: hmm ok da.. andha photo eduthala adhu entha placenu solu na anga poi pathutu vara.. apra na enoda vela mudiyira varaikum intha urlaye thangalanu iruka.. enaku rent ku oru veedu pathu kudukuriya adhuvum nee andha photo eduthala andha edathuku pakathulaye..

Vetri: dei.. adhu tourist spot da.. andha area pakathula mostly hotels, lodge andha mari tha kedaikum.. first unaku ethuku thani veedu, nee evlo naal venumo ingaye thangiko.. ithuvum un veedu mari thana..

Aadhavan: adhuku ila da.. neega newly weds, ipa na unga kuda thangurathu sariya varathu.. hotel, lodge ithulam enaku set agathu da.. adhuku tha chinnatha oru veedu paka soldra..

Vetri: macha.. engaluku endha disturbance um ila da.. nee apdilam yosikatha.. engalodaye iru..

Aadhavan: ila da.. kalyanam aagi first one year life la romba mukiyamana phase.. intha time ithukapra unga life la epavum kedaikathu.. adhukutha soldra nee enakaga yosichi, adha mis panidatha..

Vetri: sari da apana onu panalam.. inga irunthu 15 km la tha ivanga appa enga kalyanathuku seedhanama kudutha veedu iruku.. nee vena adhulaye thangiko..

Aadhavan: ila da.. unaku ethuku siramam.. na veliyave thangikira..

V.W: yen na engala pirichi pakringala.. na unga thangachi mari thana, unga thangachi veetla neega thanga matingala.. andha veeta nanga suma tha na pottu vechirukom.. neega anga thangurathula endha siramamum ila.. neega ingaye thangikalam aana neegatha vendanu adam pudikirunga.. intha theriyatha urla neega yen na kastapadanumnu nenaikiringa..

Aadhavan: adhu ila ma..

V.W: ivaru ungala pathi naraya solirukaru na.. inaiku ivaru ipdi oru government job la irukrathuku unga appa tha karanam nu epavum solite iruparu.. unga appa matum ivaruku fees katti college padika vekalana ineram anjikum pathukum kedaikira velaiya senjitu irunthurupanu adikadi soluvaru.. atleast andha nandri kadanukavathu engala itha panna vidunga na.. please..

Aadhavan: enna ma nee periya periya vaarthai ellam pesitu iruka.. sari ma na angaye thangikira.. pothuma..

Vetri: ellam soldravanga sonnatha velai aguthu.. enalam enga mathikira nee.. sari vidu, iru na ready aaitu vara.. nanga anaiku tea plantation la tha andha photo eduthom.. nama anga poi suthi iruka aalunga kita visaripom.. sariya..

Aadhavan: nee ethuku da.. nee office kelambu na pathukura..

Vetri: adhulam onum prachana ila da.. na leave solikira..

Adhavan: edthuku da.. theva ilama leave lam solikitu.. adhulam onum vena nane pathukura.. ethavathu thevana unaku call pandra.. nee andha veetoda address matum kudu.. na en velaiya mudichitu andha veetuku kelambura..

Vetri: nee enaiku than da nanga soldrathellam ketruka.. sari unaku na andha veetoda address a message panidra.. anga pakathu veetla ramanujam nu oruthar kudi iuparu.. anga unaku paal vangurathula irunthu vera endha help nalum avara kelu.. udane panni kuduthuruvaru.. na avarukita nee varanu solidra.. indha key vangiko..

(Aadhavan got the key and vetri left to office.. after that Aadhavan booked a taxi and went to the tea gardens.. there he searched all the places.. asked all the workers and the visitors in the plantation as well as near by places showing their marriage photo.. but he got the same answer from everyone that they never seen her before.. it was almost evening.. he didn't even had his lunch, his head started to spinning in the defeat.. he stumbled and sat on a bench near by a tea stall.. without his knowledge, tears found it's way from his eyes to his cheeks.. his heart is screaming to see her alteast once in his life time.. with the roller coaster emotions, he just closed his eyes and tried to calm down his thudding mind and heart.. after a while he opened his eyes and thought..)

"Enga ma iruka nee.. una thedi moonu varushama paithiyam mari alanjitu iruka di.. na anaiku sonna oru chinna poi ipdi unna engita irunthu mothama pirikumnu na ethir pakala ma.. nee ilatha ovoru nimishamum naragathula iruka mari iruku.. anaiku nee matum ena vitu pogama irunthuruntha inaiku na nenaikira ellame enaku kedaichirukum.. adhelathayum na elathutenonu nenaikum bothu enala adha thangikave mudila ma.. enaku ivlo periya dhandana vena ma.. please engita thirumba vanthudu.. please......"

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Here is the first chapter.. give a read and comment ur opinion about this.. story epdi irukunu comment panuga pa..

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