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Ever wanted to know what your reader's feelings about your books?
Ever looked for ways to improve your writing?
Is your title eye-catching?
Does your first chapter pique the writer's interest?
Does your story keep the reader h...
I don't think the title suits your plot. I doubt it'll push a random reader to pick it, so I suggest you change it. If you don't want to, it's still your choice. This is what I came up with :
'The hero among us' Or 'A letter to my hero'
Cover -
I'll say it goes well with your whole plot, with the letters and the flower. I love the way you highlighted the title making it very eye catching.
Blurb -
This is where the problem lies. Honestly when I read the blurb it brought down my expectation for the book. It didn't make me intrigued to want to read it. It was so plain and boring *no offense* I suggest you should add a part from Raksha's letter. Is that where you went? Neverland?... That whole paragraph, before you tell us about the death of the 19 year old.
Grammar -
Perfect✨ Your words flows so well, and great use of vocabulary. I couldn't find a single mistake, is that even possible? Maybe I need to read it again. I'll be right back.
Final impression -
I didn't know where the first chapter started from, so I just read the whole thing and boy/girl was I amazed. It was so beautiful 🥺❤️❤️ I felt bad for judging it as plain and boring in the first place.
*I just snitched myself 😂😂*
Any way back to my point. I've read many books but I don't think any of those books were able to arouse the kind of emotions I felt while reading your book. It was so sad, and your writing technique made me feel every part.
The part written by her best friend -
"YOU UNGRATEFUL HOE!"
Come on😂😂😂
Then Raksha's part -
It was so funny and heart breaking at the same time. How can I be crying and laughing? 😂😂😭😭 She was so naive. Are you flying with Peter Pan?🥺🥺😂😭😭
You're a really good writer, and I really enjoyed reading your book. If you take my advice into consideration I assure you it'll be more amazing.
Before I forget, I give you an 8/10
I hope you found my review helpful❤️❤️
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