The Reader's POV: Review Book {CLOSED}

While Holding The Pain ☆ Hfalcon

❥​ Author: Silent_Learner

❥​Reviewer: hfalcon24482375

❥​Chapters: 10

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❥​First Impression:

⇢​BLURB-

Your blurb is pretty gorgeous! I love the formatting in which you introduce
the characters! You also have a paragraph about the plot. You leave it on a
'cliffhanger' so we know what's going to happen without actually knowing what will
happen.

⇢​CHAPTERS-

Your chapters seem to be extremely organized! I love the Chater_X
format, it's unique but also very efficient! One thing that's definitely out of order is
COPYRIGHT! That should be the first thing there. Author's Notes/Important Notes
can be displayed without depending on how it affects the story, but if you have
general authors notes, they can go in the beginning as well.

❥​Cover/Graphics:

⇢​COLOUR SCHEME

-While the colour scheme is not always considered anything beautiful or attractive, it relates to the theme. Pained and dull. Not having bright colours was a smart choice!

⇢​RELATION TO TITLE-

At first I was a bit skeptical until I really took a look. In the girls eyes, she seems to be pained, hurt, and so full of emotions that she'll explode. It relates to the title because she looks like she's holding in the pain.

⇢​OVERALL-

The first thing I noticed is that it seems to be vertically stretched. This can of course be just my screen or possibly even the design, but it makes a wonderful piece of work look like the author doesn't care about the cover.

❥​Title:

⇢​TITLE-

Your title is stunning! It made me super excited to click the read button! It
tells you that there might be pain, suffering, and trauma, but it's also a title that tells
you that there will be an excellent story within.

❥​Plot:

⇢​PLOT HOLES-

There were no plot holes whatsoever! You explained everything
gorgeously. Even if a piece of information was missing, you can clearly tell it's part
of the story and that it will be revealed later on.

⇢​PACE-

The pace is arguably the most important part. It's essential that happenings happen at the right time. Even if the plot itself isn't very original, you can spin it around by exaggerations in pace.

You start off the story with a slow burn. We're dropped in the middle of a mess that
is soon to be solved.

⇢​HAPPENINGS-

By happenings I mean the occurrences, or scenarios you add in.

I loved every single one! Of course there were some bland moments, but you pump
them up with salty relations, sweet nothings and spicy attitudes!

You keep a nice balance between the core emotions in the story, anger, heartbreak,love, and trust. There are scenes that strongly put forth the message of one, and it dies down a bit in the next.