suggestions please

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Guys I am writing this story for you guys I want your suggestions. Please give me inline comments.

1. MaNan marriage should be early.

2. MaNan marriage must be delayed.

Regarding the charecters.

1. Nithi should become against nandini like becoming over possessive for manik.

2. Neyonica will become little negative. (Not completely negative charecter)

3. Nithi to be sent to hotel.

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