ok so i've been getting a lot of hate on my first couple of chapters recently and honestly i just want to clear the air. in the first few chapters Leoni is seriously seriously confused. yes she was raised by the grounders but she loves her mother, father and brother and there's a part of her that BELONGS to Skaikru and she wants to embrace that part. she doesn't see them as a threat or she wouldn't give up valuable information. second of all this is my first book! i have never written in Wattpad before and especially not for an audience as wide as i'm getting. those first chapters were me learning and sure maybe if i went back i would've written them differently but at the end of the day i have been building my character and will continue to build her the way I WANT TO! there is a SIGNIFICANT difference between "constructive criticism" and straight up trolling. i am all ears for a bit of constructive criticism but having full conversations about how you hate MY book in MY comment section is unacceptable. so as much as i hate to do this, i will not let it continue so i'm naming and shaming!
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My Blood
FanfictionWho could ever leave me Darlin... But who could stay? What if the Ark already had a friend on the ground and what if she happened to be just as powerful as Heda herself. What if they had Leok Haiplana Kom Natblida. In a world where Marcus Kane sent...
