Votes/Rewriting

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-Storyline-

Alright, I've been thinking about this for a long time. I think some parts of my story doesn't make any sense, such as the skills thing. I will remove the skills thing entirely from the story.

I've also thought about giving the MC into a plane rigging (no, not the Strike Witches one, I don't want the MC flying around the battlefield wearing only an underwear).

How will he get his rigging? Well, I've already made a plan on how.

Here's the illustration of the rigging, which I named F-22A Strike Raptor.

Here's the illustration of the rigging, which I named F-22A Strike Raptor

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(Again, I drawed it by myself, so sorry if it sucks. Might revise the riggings's appearance in the future.)

Features:

-Thrust Vectoring
-Energy Shield Type 1
-Plasma Sword Type 1
-Plasma Saber Type 1
-Minature arm-mounted M61 Vulcan

The AIM-120's and AIM-9's will be on the leg part, but they will be minature in size similar to the M61.

The question is, should I add the rigging or not?

A. Yus

B. Nu

C. Koff

D. Bruh

E. *yoown*

-Writing Style-

I've also wanted to ask; should I chance my writing style into a script-type (???: Hello) or stay with the novel style ("Hello")?




That is all. I'll be waiting in a week.

Stay safe, and Godbless.

And of course, your S A L V A T I O N is at hand. :)

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