Okay, so tonight I went in and made some updates on the essay, because my conclusion sucked, and I was able to add two more arguements, which technically is breaking the rules, but I mean, more evidence gives you a stronger claim.
Now it's three pages, four if you count my source list.
This is the first time I've written an essay in school that I enjoyed in a while, so I'm proud of this sucker.
Once my grade is in the gradebook for this assignment, I'll post it on here. I think I'm going to make it a book of it's own, since I think it deserves that. Either way, I'll make sure to notify you guys.
