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However it matches the story but it seems off. What I meant to say is, make it more interesting by adding a few elements to it. Like the text color has 2 defaults according to me. One it should be in a color not making the eyes squint. And it should be sharper as it looks dull. I hope you don't mind these tips.
Blurb: 4/5
It contains dialogues which makes it interesting. It's good.
First impression: 5/5
I am quite impressed. Well done author. It left me hanging and I wanted to read more. Even though I don't read idol x reader. But you seriously spiked my interest up. I will be looking forward to it.
Readers' interaction:10/10
Readers are really enjoying this story and want the next update as soon as possible.
Plot: 8/10
It is really good and unique. When I decided to read it I thought that the main lead I mean the member of BTS would be some agent and y/n would be a simple little girl but it turned out to be a whole different than I thought. well done.
Twist: 9/10
It's really great. As I have mentioned before, the story is unique and has many ups and downs.
Grammar: 7/10
It has major mistakes in a few paragraphs. I mean, not so many but there are some but they are major. I hope you can edit them.
Emotions:7/10
It feels rushed and doesn't locate where it should be. You can improve it by taking some guidance from our own academy.
Characters development: 7/10
This factor needs improvement. You should put yourself in the shoes of characters and see what you will do to improve yourself.
Writing style:8/10
Well done. You have the potential to be a writer. Your style is beautiful and unique. Keep going.
Overall: 8/10
I enjoyed the story and I am looking forward to the next update.
Total: 82/100
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