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About this, I think the font style could be changed and the mystic would look good. As well as color too. I had to squint my eyes to read it. As it's really getting mixed with the background.
Title: 3/5
Even though it suits the story well, it is not unique. By reading this, it feels like some idol x fan love story. You can change it, it is only my recommendation. If you want any name suggestion, for this type of plot I think "ARCANE" would be good. Because this story is mysterious and has suspense in it.
First impression: 4/5
It left a good impression on me. And I read further. It has the audacity to make the beginner become the permanent reader of this book.
Reader's interaction: 10/10
This book surely is good and unique. Many people are liking this as far and want more updates.
Plot: 9/10
This plot is unique. At first I thought it was just some idol x fan/reader book, but it changed my thinking quickly. This plot has fun elements as well as mystery and suspense. Good job.
Twist: 8/10
This book certainly has plots and is very well written. I am looking forward to this. However, at some points I felt like it could be improved by some editing.
Grammar: 7/10
In this factor, you need little improvement. Even though it's good, it can be better. You make mistakes in tenses as well as punctuation.
Emotions: 7/10
Sometimes they needed to be felt but I couldn't feel any. But you have done a really good job. It made me smile and even feel excited to know more, you just need a little improvement.
Character: 8/10
They are well described and well written.
Writing: 9/10
Now we have come here, so let me tell you. Even though it's a paranormal story, the way you have written this and the way you added fun elements to it, I am totally impressed. Really good job.
Overall: 8/10
Total: 74/100
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