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The description is good, what you should improve is make it more interesting, add dialogues in start. I think that'll be enough. Leaving that aside, the description is good.
Cover: ⅗
The cover picture is nice we can say, really aesthetic. The font isn't appealing, and it's really small. Could have been adjusted better. Then, since there is some space in cover, you may add subtitles or something.
Title: ⅘
Title is amazing, to be honest, nothing could have been better than this. It's attractive and effective.
First impression: 4.5/5
First of all, I must say the first impression of the story is really aesthetic, and readers seriously prefer aesthetics. The first chapter is quite short, but later reading on its neutral. If I put the cover part aside, the first impression of the story is amazing.
Reader's interaction: 5/5
There is enough attention to your book, so yeah. The comments seem joyful and satisfying. It's good.
Story plot: 10/15
There aren't many chapters in the story yet, so nothing actually happened in the story yet. So I guess that's the reason, reading so much there is nothing interesting. It feels like a clichè plot.
Plot twist: 4/10
Like I mentioned before, there is nothing happening in the story right at the moment so, yeah there aren't any plot twists yet.
Grammar: 9/10
Your grammar is really good, I must say. It's really good so far. There are some mistakes with commas and fullstops, which you may improve.
Emotions and feel: 7/10
I feel like, here you need quite an improvement, I didn't feel the emotions very nicely, as they should. Try writing those parts in more detail, that'll help.
Character development: 1/10
Here I am deducting marks, because like I said earlier, there isn't much going on in the story, so there isn't any character development yet. I'll look forward to seeing if there are any in future.
Way of writing: 9/10
I must say your writing style is amazing, it just lacks emotions and feel, rest is amazing.
Overall: 7/10
Since the story is not completed, and there are quite no plot twists at the moment, I deducted marks, cliché plot, as the story seems like, I hope it gets interesting later on.
Total: 67.5/100
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