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It is good but you can make it more interesting by adding interesting scenes from the story. Either you can add a few dialogues to make it more spicy.
Cover: 3/5
Even though it's good, I think a girl's shadow at the bottom of the page would look good. As well as the text written can be changed into a better font. As it is not visible.
Title: 3/5
I don't think it is suitable for the plot line. I am sorry to say but I just felt like that. This title is not unique or catchy.
First impression: 4/5
It was impressive. The way you described the scene was beautiful. It leaves a good impression on newcomers.
Reader's interaction: 8/10
I have seen people interacting with the story and indulging in it more and more. Well done.
Plot: 7/10
It's nothing like I haven't read any plot or story line like this. It's common in the fiction world. But twists and your writing style made this plot unique.
Twist: 8/10
As I have written before, this plot is made unique by the mystery and twist in it. Good job.
Grammar: 7/10
You made mistakes in grammar as well as punctuation. You can take online help.
Emotions: 7/10
This is the factor which needs more improvement. You should try to represent the conflict going in the character's mind and their effect on their daily lives.
Character: 8/10
They are well mingled in plot and have good descriptions.
Writing: 7/10
Your writing style is better and more unique than others. The mysterious elements as well as fun you added in the plot and made it unique.
Overall: 8/10
Total: 73/100
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