Titanic - Long Feedback

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Intro:

Titanic is a beautiful story written by the talented author 123hikibakas. With a fresh concept that recently saw a pop due to the submersible situation, this story should be on everyone's reading list. 123hikibakas is the second place winner of the Jungkook category for the Eclipse Awards. This prestigious honor is well-earned due to the incredible writing style, intriguing world, and fun and lovable characters.

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Long Review (5-8 sentences):

Titanic is a story where its main strength is its extremely unique concept. The twist on the Titanic story is beautiful, engaging, and quite frankly, fun. The characters, Jimin and Y/n in particular, are fantastic, lovable, and intriguing; I love how Y/n has multiple layers to her instead of being like most Y/n's. Even the Y/n's that get depth are still not as in-depth and layered as your Y/n, which makes this Y/n so much more interesting and fun to read. I was kept on my toes the entire time because I was cheering for Y/n, which made the read more intense, and it helps that the pacing is pretty solid throughout the story. There are some minor grammar issues like some tense issues (flip flopping between past and present tense incorrectly) and excess spaces. Otherwise, this is one of my favorite stories I've ever read on this site.

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Summary:

- Incredible plot

- The characters are lovable, with Jimin and Y/n being highlights

- The story progresses at an even rate

- There are moments of intensity because of how much we care about the characters

- Minor grammar issues

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Overall:

Titanic is an engaging read with fun, lovable characters mixed with emotional layers that separate this story from most others on this website. The Y/n is handled with extreme care, as are the other characters like Jimin and Jungkook. You should definitely check this story out, especially if you are someone who enjoys the Titanic story and wants to see a unique spin on it!

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Thank you for reading this long feedback! Thank you to the author for submitting to the Eclipse Awards, it was an honor to read your work, and I can't wait to read more of your stories! Please let me know if you have any questions <3

More reviews coming soon! Remember there are limited slots left for the Eclipse Awards. Most of the categories are closed, only the hyung line and OT7 are open now, and all of them are almost full!

Thank you guys for over 500 followers :) I'll make a more official announcement soon, but I wanted to say it here too.

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