"[Fandom] Star Wars
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[Name] Kardal Hussain
[Name Meaning] Mustard seed [Kardal] Beautiful, Handsome [Hussain]
I like it
[Age] 24
[Gender] Male
[Sexuality] Asexual
That should make it easier to be a Jedi
[Role] Hero
[Personality]
Courteous: Never
Risk-Taking: Rarely
Ambitious: Typically
Curious: Typically
Self-Controlled: Rarely
Nurturing: Generally
Trusting: Rarely
Honest: Generally
Loyal: Generally
Affectionate: Occasionally
Romantic: Never
Flirty: Often
Sympathetic: Sometimes
Altruistic: Rarely
Optimistic: Often
Observant: Sometimes
Logical: Generally
Social: Very solitary
Maybe instead of saying what he isn't you could just stick to saying what he is?
Emotions: Somewhat unstable
He reminds me of anakin
[Occupation/Rank] Jedi Knight
[Outfits] Jedi Uniform for night time he wears a simple skin coloured tunic with trousers
[Lightsaber Colour] Ocean Blue
[Looks Like] Nick Robinson [Actor]
[Hair Colour] Silver to Black Ombre [Dyed, originally black]
Fabulous
[Eye Colour] Ice Blue
[Race/Species] Human, Hispanic (?)
[Relationships]
- Abel Thorley: Has a father/son relationship with him since his Father vanished
- Kathali Harbon: A Farmgirl who journeyed with him to find his Father
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[Family]
- Mother, alive and well [Looks Like: Kiera Knightley]
Keira Knightley was Sabé (right?) but you could still use her if you like, since she was a minor character
- Father, alive but missing [Looks Like: Gerard Butler]
That's interesting
- Older Brother, alive and well [Looks Like: Sean Biggerstaff]
Raise your hand if you love Sean Biggerstaff🙋🙋
[History] [Important Parts, Notes]
- Born on Coruscant
- Older Brother called Uriah
- Mother called Pegia
- Father vanished when he was 2 months' old
- He was trained by Former Jedi Abel Thorley [Looks like: James McAvoy]
- He travelled the galaxy with Abel Thorley when he was 9 years' old
- He came back to Coruscant when he was 19 only to find his Mother crying in her room and his brother gone.
Pain is the path to the dark side
[Crush/Love Interest]
- A farm girl on Tatooine called Kathali Harbon [Looks like: Miranda Cosgrove], but got over it because she was in love with someone else. (He did feel a bit of betrayal and rage, but he never blamed her)
He's giving me anakin vibes but cooler, not creepy and annoying like Anakin.
[Other] He sings by himself and never in front of anyone.
Same
[Theme Song] True Colours- Cyndi Lauper
Thoughts:
Some of his traits lead me to think he would go to the dark side. I think he is very interesting and complex. Good job! I would definitely read this. Let me know when it's up!
Mary Sue rating: 10% (he seems similar to Luke or Anakin)
Interest Grade: 100%! I would definitely read this!!!
Statement: May the Force be with this OC
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