"(ps can I request Angelica because she's the embodiment of my soul thanks)
You don't have a soul either? That's pretty cool
Name: Rachael Jade Ellison
I really like it
Age: 16 (I know, I know)
Yeah lol
Fandom: Harry Potter
Gender: Female
Backstory: Theres not much to say about her childhood, overall it was normal. Her parents used to travel a lot with her, but she doesn't remember much of it because she was pretty young. She's fairly close with her older sister Mira, but on the inside she's a bit insecure about the fact that her sister's more successful than her (academically, mostly)
That's good. It's not overdramatic and its normal
Appearance: She has red hair (sorry), wow it's like you know exactly what I'm gonna say *eyes you suspiciously*it's straight and a little past her shoulders, and blue eyes. She's not very tall but not exactly short, sort of in between, and she has light freckles on her nose
That's a really cliche look. Has anyone hear read The Selection
Species: Witch
Strengths: She's clever and very determined, which makes her pretty persuasive and she uses that to her advantage to get what she wants (totally not blackmail *cough cough it's definitely blackmail cough cough*) yep yep yep she's me
Weaknesses: She's stubborn, and can be out of touch with her emotions sometimes, which tends to make her seem pretty insensitive. In other words, she has no filter. Academically, her worst subject is Herbology because she's too impatient and just doesn't have the time to wait for plants to grow.
I like that
Powers: She's a witch, so... magic.
Friends: Lily Evans (oh yeah this is marauder era by the way 😂), Emmeline Vance, the Marauders, Marlene McKinnon, Alice Fortescue, Bella Barringer (other oc), I will be adding from other Houses too, but I don't want too many ocs so I'm in the process of finding students from other Houses during that time) still, it's good to have a lot of OC's. She can't be friends with all the canon characters.
Enemies: Severus Snape. At first she just liked poking fun at him, but since last year when he called Lily a Mudblood, she's gotten a lot more serious about her hatred for him. Understandable
Thanks!!
Overall, she's very average. The only thing that stands out about her is her personality, so expand on that.
Mary Sue Rating: 40% she can't be friends with all the canon characters and the red hair part makes her look cliche
Originality Grade: 80% I like her personality
Interest Grade: 80%
Statement: I'm gonna give you a high grade because we are soul twins)
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