"Name: Naomi Finnigan
Fandom: Harry Potter Next Gen
Cool. I'm guessing she's Seamus's daughter
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Year: 7
So does the book just take place in seventh year
Blood status: pureblood
I don't know how that's possible since Seamus was a half blood
Species: Witch
Sexuality: straight
Personality: Funny, Outgoing, kind, a little violent, caring, awkward
Sounds like me. Except the caring and kind part. And without the funny and outgoing part. Oh, and the awkward part. Yeah I'm just violent
Appearance: a little chubby, but also a little curvy. Brown eyes and hair. Likes to wear comfy stuff under her Hogwarts Robes
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House: Gryffindor
Makes sense
Friends: Albus, James, Lily, Rose, Hugo, Jamil(OC), Jamie(Oc), Scorpius, Charlise(Oc)
I would take out Albus and Scorpius since they're both antisocial and slytherin
Crush: James, Mason(Oc, looks like Thomas Brodie-Sangster)
Back story: Normal childhood, Her mom and Dad had 2 kids. One being Naomi and the other being Chase. They are twins
Cool beans.
Ew I said cool beans please end me
Sooo she was good, she wasn't a Mary Sue. There is nothing special about her. Is her story just a normals persons life at Hogwarts? Draw in your readers.
Mary Sue Rating: 17%
Interest Grade: 50%
Originality rate: 80%
Statement: making red robes redder with blood stains
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