Name: Grace
Last name?
Age: 15
People usually start at first year, so props to you for not🙌🏼👏🏼
Fandom: Harry Potter
Gender:Female
Backstory: she is the smartest witch of her age and I smuggle born. Her father and mother died and now she lives with her Grandma and papa. She's still a super happy girl though!😊
OKAY NO! Please don't make her "the smartest witch of her age". She can still be very smart but every Mary-Sue is "the smartest". But aside from that, I like that she is muggle born!
Appearance: Blonde hair, blue eyes, a tiny bit of freckles and some strands of her hair are Naturally pinkish purple.
Wait, what? Hair cannot be naturally pink or purple. I'm sorry.
Species: witch
Strengths: her friends, family, smartness, happiness, cleverness, slyness.
How are friends and family strengths...
Weaknesses: perfectionist, braggy, a little too happy!
Powers: (she has a wand, no powers.)
Friends: Alice, Isabelle, Sirius, James, Tonks, and Bellatrix
Alice Longbottom or an OC named Alice? And also, if she is at Hogwarts during the Marauders time, make sure to make that clear.
Enemies: Lucious, Narcissa, fenrir.
Hmmm. Maybe make a character who is typically portrayed as nice one of her enemies?
house: Ravenclaw
Coolio👍🏼
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Mary-Sue: 50% Please don't make her the smartest witch. please. and also, hair is never naturally purple/pink. I think with a little tweaking, this will be a great story.
Originality: 65% I like how she is 15 rather than 11.
Statement: Ya like jazz?🐝
Admin: Eliza💖
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