(Jokesue) (If it's okay,can I have all the admins review this? It's fine if you guys can't do it)
Peggy is bolded.
Eliza is underlined
Angelica is italics
Fandom:Harry Potter
Name:Lila Lovely yay only two names!!!
Haha
Lila Lovely...please shoot me from the fluffiness
Gender:Female
Species:Half blooded witch,half veela. Here we go...
I can feel it coming
Description:Princess Blonde long shiny hair with natural hot pink streaks,natural blue coloured nails,tan,blue and green eyes,5'7. Does she look like a princess it is she a princess. And what's up with that hair?
Wow I love this
Imagine being a regular Hogwarts student and this monstrosity walking into the castle
Personality:Sweet,flirty,always gets what she wants. Typical
I really want bleach rn
I don't understand how people do this
Likes:Boys,Animals,Bright colours,jewelry,clothes,flowers.
Bleh
Dislikes:Dark colours,good looking girls,blood. Wait blood?
Is she a vampire??
Vampires like blood stupid^
Strengths:Potions,Transfiguration, Charms,Divination,Defence Against The Dark Arts,Astronomy. So pretty much everything...
Please, give me the sweet release of death
Weaknesses:Tests Haha same
That's actually okay
Backstory:Had the perfect life,rich family,got what she wanted.
She actually sounds like a typical Regina George, not a Mary Sue
Friends:Tina(Gryffindor) and Mira(Gryffindor). Tina Mira and Lila
I'd love to read Mean Girls at Hogwarts
Enemies:Hermione,Ginny,Lavender,
Parvati,Pansy and her friends. Pansy's friends I take it And not her own friends.
Crush(s):Harry,Ron,and Draco. I'm guessing she ends up with one of them right?
Probably all of them
Angelica's Ratings:
Mary Sue rating: 80% she sounds more like a mean girl than a Mary Sue
Originality Rating: 10%
Interest Grade: 80% I'd read Mean Girls: Hogwarts
Eliza's Ratings:
Mary Sue Rating: 90% perfect for a joke Sue but terrible for the eyes
originality: 5% I'm not really sure what to say
interest: 20% sorry but I don't like joke Sue's
Statement: Do you like spoons?
Peggy's ratings:
Mary Sue:95% gokd for a joke sue
Originality:70%
Interest:40%
Statement: 🐝🐝
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