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Name: Lizabeth (Liz) Gerhal
Pretty.
Age: 18
Gender: Girl
Sexuality: Lesbian
Species: Mermaid
Haha a lesbian mermaid. That leads me too the question, how do mermaids procreate
Appearance: Brown hair with natural highlights, Petite, lime green eyes, Light skin
Seems natural for a mermaid
Friends: Moka~Kun(Oc), Elvana(Oc), Glow (Oc), and more (To lazy)
Crush: Moka~Kun (Oc)
Backstory: Born as a mermaid and raised as a mermaid. When she was 11 she figured out that she was lesbian. Her parents were completely fine with it . She decided to go up to the surface of the water and saw a girl who she was attracted to. She went to her and they instantly clicked. Her name was Moka~Kun. After awhile they figured out they both loved the same stuff. They went to a-cons and comic cons.
Cool
Personality: Outgoing, social, Talks to everyone, Nice to everyone, Popular but not the snotty mean type of girl.
Famliy: Dad, Mom, Young brother
No strengths or weaknesses? The only thing not stereotypical about her is being lesbian
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Name: Moka-Kun
Age: 18
Gender: Girl
Sexuality: Bisexual
Species: Human with Cat ears a cat tail
Hahha
Appearance: Dirty blonde hair, curvy, ^^^, Brown eyes.
Friends: Liz, Elvana, Glow, and more (to lazy) all ocs
Lol same
Crush: Liz (Oc)
Backstory: A normal girl who has a magical Wand that can do alot of stuff. She mostly uses her magic to change Liz into a human.
Oh a wizard that's really cool
Family: Mom, Dad, only kid
Okay so I really like the concept but I didn't get much about their personalities from this.
Mary Sue Rating: 70%
Originality Grade: 70%
Interest Grade: 80%
Statement: "I was going to make a joke about a cliche wizard and mermaid but a certain hp fanfiction author and her fandom would kill me for it"
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