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Alison Maxine Jones (B)

"Okay, so here's one that isn't a joke Sue. Also, she has a long backstory *jumps into Lazarus Pit for shits and giggles*

Name: Alison Maxine Jones
Age: 15 pretty cliche. If she's a superhero that's kinda stupid, since she can't even drive yet
Fandom: Dc/Marvel is it a crossover
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Pansexual yeah okay
Backstory: Pretty usual, lived with both her parents until Destiny (DC villain who manipulates people into seeing other as demons and makes them attack the eople they see as demons). What did Destiny doShe was attacked by her parents, who thought she was a devil child and attempted to kill her, which lead to severe emotional scarring. The Justice League arrived, and defeated Destiny, but not before Ali's mother managed to get a cut on her arm that became her first scar. I don't follow All people under Destiny's spell were cleared of all charges, but Ali's parents refused to have Alison in the house, lest they hurt her again. She was sent to live with her Aunt Linda and Uncle George, and would visit her parents regularly. Okay
The emotional trauma she suffered from this incident kick started her metagene, that would act up whenever she felt strong emotions, which lead to blackouts. After a severe panic attack that took out half of New York's power, she came to the attention of the Justice League and met Flash, one of her favorite heroes. Of course she didHe taught her to control her powers and she ended up meeting his nephew, Wally West. The two soon became best friends, but didn't meet as regularly once Ali had learned to manage her powers.
Alison soon realized her powers could be used for good and she became a hero. Wally figured out who she was when she visited Central City, and told Flash, who told the rest of the League. She was given proper training and equipment and occasionally teamed up with a Leaguer.
In a mission gone wrong, Alison found herself against Match (failed, super powerful clone of Superman) and lost the battle badly.well that's good She taken by Cadmus, and experimented on. When the Justice League finally found her, she was nearly broken and almost murdered KF.
"They did manage to break the control Cadmus had over her mind, but it was a close call.
Alison managed to physically recover, but the mental scars have never left and have lead to a strong dislike of Superman due to his similarity to Match and an outright hatred of Superboy and Red Arrow, for being Cadmus clones.

Appearance: Blonde hair, hacked off once she had her first of many mental breakdowns, blue-grey eyes, rather small and skinny, muscled from her superhero job, flat chested
I like her look
Species: (Meta)Human

Strengths: Her powers and her fighting skills

Weaknesses: Fear of needles, hospitals and any medical treatment. Scared to use her powers thanks to Cadmus experiments. Has trigger phrases that set off her PTSD. Her resolve can crumble if the main person who experimented on her in Cadmus is around, hatred of anything to do with Cadmus, vulnerability to water, mistrust of adults.
I like all of that
Powers: Has the ability to control electricity, but is too afraid to use it unless it's an emergency

Friends: Wally West, Barry Allen, Zatanna Zatara (to a small extent) Greta Hayes (Former- died)
Make some OC friends or something
Enemies: Cadmus, Jeremiah Holt (Original villain who was the main doctor at Cadmus), Lex Luthor, Vandal Savage, Harm

Other: Just tell me if she's sue-ish and how to fix it.
She's pretty good. I like how she's scarred from failing instead of winning everything. She has a good look too. Just the whole "abused the adopted" is very overused. And make some OC friends.
Mary Sue rating: 20%
Originality Grade: 70%
Interest Grade: 60%
Statement: I'm shook
Admin: Angelica