"Here's my OC, although it will have to come in two parts because everything didn't fit
Name: Alice Walker pretty. The name gives me the idea of what the character will be like
Age: 15 years in the beginning
Fandom: Original (or none, depending on how you see it)
Gender: Male, although he looks females that's unfortunate considering the name
Backstory: His parents were forced to give him up for adoption when he was born, because he was special and people might look for him. What?His parents gave him up simply to protect him. The adoptive parents knew of his gifts and raised him as a girl to protect him even more. He had a rather normal childhood, up until the age of nine, which is when his gifts appeared. Ever since then, he has kept at a distance from other people, seeing as his ability makes it hard for him to be around people (more about that later). Okay thenWhen he turns ten, he gets kidnapped and taken to a prison. Why tho He goes through four years of torture a then one year of rehabilitation, so that his captors' can use him as an agent to frighten people. Wow okay. I'm shook He manages to escape from his captors. He is currently on the run from them, trying to forget everything he has been through. He wants to find out who he really is and who his real parents are. And maybe, just maybe, he will take revenge for what happened to him. I've noticed that crazy OC's are always names Alice. I had one myself.
Appearance: He is about 165 cm tall (5'4"). He looks a lot like a doll, with pale skin and fine facial features. Like that poppyHis eyes are blue and constantly observing what is happening around him. His hair is blond and straight. It reaches down to his elbows. He usually has it down, but he braids it every now and then. He is slim, to the point of it being unhealthy, but he is aware of this and trying to change it. He has a lot of scars, many of them are results from torture, but some come from self-harm. Aw
"And here's the rest
I'm poppy
Species: Human
Powers: He has the ability to feel and to a degree control other people's emotions, although controlling other people's emotions mostly happen accidentally. I can do that without powers
Strengths: He is willing to go to great lengths to protect his loved ones, he is smart and quick to make a decision. He is also quite perceptive (because of his ability)
Weaknesses:
• Has a hard time trusting people makes sense
• He is reserved, but not really shy (his ability makes it hard to be around large amounts of people).
• He sometimes lies to protect himself
• He can easily be consumed by his and other people's emotions and that makes it hard for him to focus sometimes.
• Although he takes quick decisions, he does not always make good ones
• He is self-destructive
Makes a lot of sense considering his backstory
Friends: Mary (girlfriend), Julia (friend), Bianca (protector)
Enemies: Erica (kidnapper), Malcolm (kidnapper/torturer), Joe (father), Johnny (Mary's ex)
That's good
Overall, it's a very good OC. Not at all a Mary Sue. maybe add something to just attract your readers. Not really sure what to say other than I'm Poppy I'm poppy I'm poppy I'm poppy I'm poppy I'm poppy
Mary Sue rating: 0%
Originality Grade: 90%
Interest Grade: 70%
Statement: I'M POPPY
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