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Admin Request: Angelica
Aye. Just letting you know I feel really trippy right now so forgive me if I say something weird.
Fandom: Harry Potter Next Generation
Name: Raelynn Cassiopeia Malfoy
I love her name, seems fitting for a Malfoy but yeah being a Malfoy is cliche. Is she Scorpius's age. Scorpius's? Scorpiuss? I'm confused how do you say that
Age:15
So does the book just take place when she's 15
Gender: Female
Species: Human/Witch
Blood Status: Pure blood
Personality: naughty, sarcastic, rude(ish), proud, cocky, stuck up, short tempered, cunning, flirtatious, caring and loving once you get on her good side, judgmental, dishonest, impatient, loud, prideful, devious, ambitious, procrastinator and very lazy
Sounds like Draco. And me lol
Appearance: long semi curly blonde hair with some light brown lowlights, bright icy blue eyes, skinny, clean skin, 5'6 tall and always wears an emerald green ring on her right hand
Sounds like a Malfoy
House: Slytherin
Backstory: Raelynn has a normal life as she lives with her mother, Astoria and her father, Draco with her younger brother, Scorpious. Wait is it Scorpious or Scorpius. WoahYet, like her father she is struggling to uphold the Malfoy name as she meets her nemesis, James Potter II oh god here we go
Is a bathtub a reverse boat
Strengths: she is tough, doesn't back down in an argument, she is very persuasive, good at acrobatics and is a great chaser in quidditch
That's pretty typical
Weaknesses: she is very self conscious about herself. always wondering if she is still holding the Malfoy name in honor. She's basically DracoRaelynn is also very personal about her family ties, she doesn't like it when people start rumors about her family. when the rumors go around, it usually ends up with Raelynn getting super pissed and flipping out on the person me tho
Powers: she's a witch, but messes around with dark magic and ends up having uncontrollable ice powers
Yeah no. That's not how the force works. Don't turn her into Elsa-Draco
Friends: Petra (OC), Albus Potter, Fred Weasley II, no wayCarson Weaver (OC), Prince Zabini (OC), Brittany (OC), Teddy Lupin and her brother, Scorpious Malfoy
I feel like she is the opposite of Albus and Scorpius, who had no friends. Also purebloods would never mix with Teddy Lupin
Enemies: James Potter, Voldemort and any surviving Death Eaters
How come shorts are called shorts but pants aren't called longs
Overall, she was basically female Draco with Elsa's powers. Add something original to her, that isn't ice powers or any kind of powers. Add a magical weakness that she has to overcome
Mary Sue Rating: 70%
Originality Grade: 50%
Interest Grade: 70%
Statement: I'm not stoned, just slightly pebbled.
Admin: Angelica
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