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Name: Cinderella ''Belle'' Beaumont so she's two Disney princesses
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Blood-Status: Muggle-Born Species: Human
Sexuality: Heterosexual Personality:Quiet, kind, and conscientious. Often puts the needs of others above their own needs. Observer with rich inner world of observations about people. Very perceptive of other's feelings. Private and polite. Timid, socially uncomfortable, modest, not confrontational, easily hurt. Fears drawing attention to self. Easily frightened. Easily offended or hurt. Prone to crying. Lower energy. Follows the rules, dutiful and responsible. Stable and practical, valuing security and traditions. Well-developed sense of space and function. Interested in serving others. So basically Belle and Cinderella
Dislikes competition. Good at finishing tasks. Clean, organized, a planner. Not spontaneous, does not appreciate eccentricity. Intolerant to differences. Prone to confusion. Those are good weaknesses
Ethnicity: Scottish/French Appearance: • Blonde Hair• Eyes: Navy Blue• Caucasian • Looks Like: Mia Wasikowska• So basically Cinderella Freckles on nose and cheeks • 120lbs (Weight) • 5'7 (Height)
House: Ravenclaw, because she always would read books and be found studying. Belle
Wand: The wand is made of almond wood and has a core of dryad hair. It is 10 and 1/4 inches long and is quite rigid. It is somewhat lightly coloured and is intricately carved.
Family: Ivor Beaumont- Father (Alive)Isobel Beaumont- Mother (Alive) pretty names. Glad they're Alive
History: Cinderella Beaumont was born in Aberdeen, Scotland 1960. She was the only child in the family so she was very lonely, when she went to Primary School, she would always stick her head in a book – usually reading fairy tales – and not pay attention to any of the other students in class. So, she earned the nickname ''Belle'' after the character in ''Beauty and the Beast'' which she was always caught reading all the time. Her mother, Isobel always bought her books but her father wanted her to read factual books and learn about life.A mysterious letter arrived on the 10th May 1970 and Cinderella was told that she was a witch. Her parents were surprised about it because they weren't magical, her father checked the Family Tree to see if there were any witch or wizards in their Ancestry. Well they names her Cinderella what did they expect He found one wizard named ''Alistair Beaumont'', who fought during World War I. When Cinderella arrived at Hogwarts, she was quite timid at the ghosts and strange magic floating around her. She met the famous author (-in my story) Phineas Pan, who reminded her of J.M. Barrie's character Peter Pan, he came to Hogwarts to teach them a lesson on English Studies (he was a half-blood author) in her second year. Cinderella was also nicknamed Belle by some of the Gryffindor and Hufflepuff students (not as an insult though). As Cinderella grew up, she started seeing fictional characters from the books like Alice in Wonderland, Peter Pan and Beauty and the Beast, she thought she was going mad but her mother said that all the best people are. That can't be true because I'm crazy and I'm the worst
I like the whole Disney meets Hogwarts thing. Crush: (none)
Love Interest: Lupus Lux {Pureblood Wizard, OC
Overall, she's a great character. She's not amazingly special but she's still good. Readers can project onto. She reminds me of sea glass. Clean, pretty, and well rounded, but no diamond.
Mary Sue rating: 30% her look is pretty sueish, and her being naturally smart is too. She needs major weaknesses to balance this.
Originality grade: 70% she's basically a Disney princess lol
Interest Grade: 80%
Statement: I'm headed straight for the castle
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