"Name: Danielle Ivers Peterson. Ooh pretty
Age: Seventeen.
Cliche but I don't even care anymore
Gender: Female
Backstory: She bore in Ireland, when she had 17 she moved to Oxford, England. She had a good relationship with her father, but then their parents broke up when she was 10, because his father was gay, haha Rip one year later he died because he was gay. He died because he was gay???now I feel bad for saying ripHer sister has grown up so fast, when Dany was twelve she heard her sister having relationships with lots of boys. Before moving to Oxford the school called her "Baby Tale", because her best friend found Dany's mother telling a fairy tale to Dany, such a good friend. What a great friend
Species: No.
Sexuality: Straight common but I'm straight so whatever
Appearance: Long, straight and Red-head hair with lots of freckles, dun eyes and long eyebrows. Is that common when you're Irish Remarked dimples and wide mouth with perfect and lined teeth. Short legs, long trunk and short arms. Skinny, of white race and short neck. Pretty basic but so is she
Strengths: Independent, not so related with people, beautiful, sure of herself and sweet. If everyone called me baby tail I would be sure of myself
Weakness: Weak, grumpy and sensitive.
Friends: her mother, her sister, her grandpa and her intimate friend, Arthur.
Enemies: No.
Thanks you're welcome
She was a Mary Sue. Pretty, white, straight, nice to people, confident. I didn't get anything about her personality or any real weaknesses.
Mary Sue Rating: 70%
Interest Grade: 50%
Originality: 50%
Statement: *yawn*
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