Sorry for the chapter name lol that tik tok sound has been stuck in my head all day. Chile anyways um I desperately need some feedback so if you can be real with me keep reading if not lol I'll have a new chapter for you to read up within the next two days.
SO I saw a tik tok today and this girl was saying how she loves 150 chapter books with drama and build up and all that and descriptive writing. And like I tried to do a build up for this relationship but it wasn't as great as it could be (I'm not gonna go back and change it though, although I could actually just delete that last chapter and make it last longer and get in Madeline and Sirius BEFORE regulus and M start dating. And also literally be honest I have no feelings (unless it's for fictional men) so don't worry about being mean or making me feel bad. Should I upgrade my writing, like try do better and be more descriptive? Like does that make sense like what I'm asking?😂 um anyways- so basically let me know if I should change how I write OH AND IF I SHOULD DELETE THE LAST CHAPTER OR NOT AND JUST GET SIRIUS AND MADELINE IN SOME TIME IN THE FUTURE IDK MAN😂
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Shadows | Regulus Black
FanfictionMadeline Potter. James Potters sister, very similar yet very different from each other. They were always very close growing up, and that didn't change much when they went to Hogwarts. Madeline never really wanted to get into a relationship, she got...
