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Beyond Claws [Dee]

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by MelloniaCommunity

                                    
                                              Book: Beyond Claws
Author: Shalalalawrites
Reviewer: DHBurnside
Chapters read: 1
One
The first chapter is well written. It’s visual and the dialogue has a nice easy flow to it. For the first chapter, I did find it very slow and I think it needs a little more action inside of it to hook the reader. Why would a potential reader want to read past the first few paragraphs? What are they going to learn about these characters?
Looking forward to reading more as the story develops. 
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