Book: In Love With Dr. Beast
Author: Coffeelover_antara1
Reviewer: The_Pencraft
Chapters read: 9
Title:
I got curious after looking at the title. I wanted to know the reason. After reading it, I found it to be perfect for the story.
Description:
The description is enough to catch anyone's attention. It was written in a concise manner without giving too many spoilers. No change is needed.
Prologue:
As the story is not complete I am not sure…so far I learned about Hridya, I think the things mentioned in the prologue will actually take place in upcoming chapters, if it is so then it is not a prologue, it is a precap. Prologue is something that tells a background story, which is not repeated in the story. For example: If there is going to be a story of Lucifer coming to the human world for some mission. An intro of him how he became a fallen angel can be a prologue and that will never be repeated In the upcoming chapters. Even if it is a precap I found it unnecessary.
Opening:
It was done perfectly. No change is needed.
Plot:
Every incident was in a sequence. Although there were two povs and things were taking place side by side, no trouble was faced while reading and understanding.
Writing style:
It was really easy to read and understand the story. It was pacing. Enough details we're given. The fluency of your story was perfect. I will suggest you to keep it in one language that is English as mostly it is in English. I am not a fan of too much pov but your story is different. There were two povs so far and were done perfectly.
Dialogues:
It was done perfectly. The dialogues were catchy and you mentioned their emotions sir by side. Just keep it in English as your story is mainly in English.
Character Sketch:
So far, each and every character was introduced perfectly. Their role was clear.
Grammar And Vocabulary :
Negligible amount of grammatical mistakes were made and even your vocabulary is good.
I really enjoyed your story.
Happy Writing!
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