Please Read! EMERGENCY!

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Hello guys. I'm not confident enough to continue my story. I feel like the story itself is twisted and there are a lot of grammar mistakes, typos and plot holes.

I badly need your thoughts. Will I continue it? or will I stop writing?

Please criticise my work. I don't care what you say. Am I dragging the story? Is the way I write bad? Do I tend to focus on different things in one time, making the story confusing?

I'm also not good at making romantic scenes so I want you to please tell me what to do.

Your comments will be very much appreciated.

I need thoughts whether to continue or stop writing. Until I recieve your comments only then will I start to write another chapter.

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