Trying to write my version of Sounoor as Mineil.
The story goes on from where it was stopped in the show "PATIALA BABES".
Those who are reading, please watch Patiala Babes on Sony LIV from episode number 257 to 349 and then read this story. It's an...
Mini: ( Knocking at the door) Neil...yaar...aisa bhi kya ho gaya...Leave it na....Mujhe case ke baare me baat karni hai....kholo door....what has happened to you suddenly?
Neil opened the door and pulled her in. She was pinned to the wall. Neil kept one hand on the wall behind her on the wall.
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Neil: Tumko sachchi me samajh nahi aa raha....?
Mini: Nahi?...Kya ho gaya....?
She looked into her eyes....deep in those eyes she could feel the possessiveness he had for her..... He stepped back and turned.
Neil: How dare he look at you like that? I can't tolerate anyone looking at you like that...Mujhe tumhe waha lekar hi nahi jana chahiye tha....galti meri hai.....It's my fault...
Mini understood the reason of his unusual behaviour and he was right as she was much uncomfortable by Ritwick's lustful gaze.
Mini: It's not your fault Neil.
Neil: Main agar tumhe nahi le gaya hota to vo.... (stopped)
Mini: Vo...kya?
Neil: Kuch nahi.... leave it.....
Mini : (To lighten up his mood) Tumhe kyu farak padta hai? Aise to bahot ladke mujhe aise dekhte hai....(She went in front of him and then was going back again)
Neil: Jaise kaun?
Mini: Ab ek ya do ho to bataun....bahot saare hai....
Neil held her hand and pulled her back possessively but their feet got entangled and they lost balance. They fell on the bed. Mini was not top of Neil and her hair strands was falling on his face.
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He removed the strands coming in the front and kept his hand on her cheek. He was not able to handle his possessiveness and wanted to confess what he felt for her but couldn't. All he was able to say was...
Neil: Tumhe dekhne ka haq sirf unko hona chahiye jo tumhe respect se dekhe...because you deserve much better....
She felt contented with his answer. But still thought her love was one- sided....Tears formed in her eyes......Neil rubbed her tears off.
