REVIEW#70
GENRE: FANFICTION, ROADTRIPTV
BY: Colors0218
STATUS: COMPLETED
RATE: 8/10
CONTAINING: boyxgirl, simple plot, a little bit suicidal at the beginning (not hardcore)
REVIEW:
First of all, I like to thank the author for waiting for so long and all. I'll get started on the review.
This also a fandom that I'm not familiar with so please bear with me. But overall after reading, I think I can understand the story. It's a very simple plot and it's a good plot to start writing, romance is one of the easiest plots we could think of and write. So is a good start in writing, so while reading the book I try to understand some aspect of the book.
I try to understand the romance part since I think it's important in the book, a little heads up for the author, I really like the story it's very light and very enjoyable, But it would have been better if you can expand more in the romance part, I feel like you need to explain a bit more on the two leading characters on how they feel about each other since it was a bit tense on the beginning, so I need to know how the characters feel.
another advice for the author, you can put a bit break on the story since I see you have long chapters written, not just for me who is not in the fandom might not fully understand the story, I think it will look great for visual too so it's not tiring to read.
But I really like the character's introduction, really helpful to visualize the story and again I'm very sorry for the delay of this review.
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