FANFICTION REVIEWS

VAMPIRE HOUSE I BTSxEXO

REVIEW#85

GENRE: FANFICTION, BTSxEXO, Vampire au

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STATUS: ONGOING
RATE: 8/10
CONTAINING: Vampire au, BTSxEXO

SUMMARY:

"Hush...my dear." A strange and dark yet familiar voice wrapped around my neck as the stranger pulled me close to him. "A quick bite and I promise it won't hurt just a little..." I froze as I felt his grip stronger and his warm breath tickle my neck. I couldn't believe that this is happening for real.

REVIEW:

First of all, I want to thank the author for waiting for this review. Again I do really like a good vampire story and I really like this book, it's a bit different plot from some common vampire stories but also very common for something with a bit confusing plot. As for right now, I'm excited to wait for the next chapter since I really want to know what happens.

Personally I don't think there are grammatical errors and I love how each different POV the author skips ( for the aesthetic purpose the author is doing a great job) and yes, I do know that having too much media will be hard for some of the readers that are reading offline so I think it was not a problem.

My advice is since you have a lot of characters to handle and a complicated plot I advise you to take it easy and enjoy what you write and I was really amazed at the author from the first chapter and the last chapter the author had written, you could really see great improvement. So I wish the author good luck.