ILLUMINATING HEART

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REVIEW#76

GENRE: FANFICTION, JJK

BY:  ghostair
STATUS: COMPLETED
RATE: 10/10
CONTAINING: boyxgirl, simple plot, social issues, full-on fluff, sad

SUMMARY:

Fireflies enhance the beauty of nature. Just like she enhances Jungkook's will to live. He was healing because of her. He found out that his only source of happiness was seeing her smile. His cold heart could only be melted by her warmth. And that is when he made up his mind to face the reality.


REVIEW:

First of all, what the f- (wait I'm not supposed to curse) flower. I would like to address the author for bringing my hopes up and then crushing them, and I guess I will represent every person who read the author's short story. How could you leave me hanging like this? I need more explanation but don't get me wrong really a great short story and very tragic

I guess a full 10/10 for this short story, I was getting so hooked on the story and then the ending just came crashing in my doorstep. I really like this short story, I would really recommend some of this short story for all of the readers who like reading a short story. I didn't really find any grammatical error and it was really well written and all.

I think the author has really good writing skills in a short story and I recommend them to go join some more competition because this is literally a bomb. I hope to find more stories like this in the future wether from this author or other author.

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