WoF OC Reviews

(Technically Princess?) Flame (re-do)

Funny thing - I'm actually listening to that song right now.

Name- Flame :3

X3

Age- About 27ish years

Awesome, awesome.

Gender- Female

Yeppo.

Sexuality- Straight

Alrighty-o.

Tribe- RainWing/SkyWing

It's good that the reasoning of this hybrid is explained in the backstory.

Abilities- {it just occurred to me that Venom boils away {like vanilla :b} so I don't think it's entirely possible for it to mutate to a point it can be flammable.} Patches of Camoflauging scales, very powerful wings, RainWing Venom, can make a burst of smoke, which is quite painful {to her}, but it can stun a dragon's vision for a little while. She is also quite intelligent.

I'll let the "RainWing venom" pass, because it could technically happen.

Rank- Is leader of a group pf Hybrids called the Sparks Of Truth, but also *Technically* A princess {is that better then justice?}

Yes, actually, it is better than Justice. Sparks of Truth sounds lots better, and less heroically cheesy.

Appearence- flame has a quite large RainWing body and a wide frame. She Has red scales, pale yellow under belly, but also Has patches of color changing scales that she usually keeps red to match. She has almost an entire RainWing body except for the wings, tail, horns, and face shape, which is SkyWing. Has amber eyes and three triangle tattoos under each eye. Wears a gold band on her right arm. {See Backstory for info on the gold band}

Great appearance.

Personality- Very intelligent and great Strategist. She loves to read and has quite a collection of Scrolls. She is however usually quite grumpy, but can be very caring and loving. She gets stressed and agitated easily, when she does get stressed she is terribly mean and sarcastic. Flame is very untrusting of others, but once she does trust you she gets MAJORLY attached. Over all though she is very loyal to her people...

This makes sense. She was raised by her father, so it makes sense that she would have more of a SkyWing personality, but of course with some RainWing. I likey.

Backstory-

So. It starts with this dragonet named Coal. One day his mother Crimson, ticks him off by being over protective and saying that he still is just a Dragonet. Coal snorts and goes exploring to see if her can find something to show his mom he's not weak. {He's around 7ish at the time}

Keep in mind that once a dragon reaches the age of 7, they're officially an adult. So, maybe perhaps lower his age a teeny bit.

He strays too far from their home and gets captured by a RainWing. The RainWing brings him to Queen Peyote, who says to interrogate him and sew if her has any useful information about secret SkyWing plans. They imprison him in the village. He meets a RainWing, Vivid. Who he slowly falls in love with. After a month or so the Queen says to set him free, since he wasn't giving them any info. Coal goes to leave, but decides to stay because of Vivid. {His mum was still looking for him, but to be frank, Queen Garner didn't care Coal was missing} He tells the Queen he'd rather help them. A few years past and a new Queen comes to the throne, Ember. {Coal is 15-20ish now} Ember says that her love interest {let's call him Goat} -

Okay, now you've got me imagining what would've happened if he survived, married Queen Ember, and became King. King Goat.

-was killed by a RainWing. Though he really was just killed by some thieves when he went to see why RainWings kept being found in SkyWing territory. Queen Ember rages war on the RainWing out of revenge. Coal decides to be a Spy for them. # End of act 1 #