Whether or not it's an Au: I'm genuinely not sure. I have sat down for hours and rethought my story. So maybe? It's in Pyhrria, but I'm not how sure into the future yet. It's decently far tho, cause there are new Queens.
Okay. Also, it's Pyrrhia — my friend? Acquaintance? Anyway, somebody that I know, I think it was Bea-Chan who said it (You may have heard of her — if not, go follow her, her user is ariesgirl5962) but there's a way to remember how to spell "Pyrrhia" — think of it as an analogy.
P - Peril,
Y - You're
R - Really
R - Really
H - Honestly
I - Irritating
A - Anemone
Era/Time Period: Like I said before still don't know.
Okay.
Name: Ether!
I haven't seen the name before; good job.
Age: 16 in human years.
*internally explodes*
... Just put 6 years old. Please. It's equivalent to 16 in human years.
Gender: Male
Cool.
Sexuality: Bi-romantic
Uh... what's her sexual orientation? I asked for sexual orientation; romantic orientation's optional.
Tribe: Skywing/Nightwing Hybrid
I've seen it before, but it's a cool hybrid nonetheless.
Queen they Support: He supports Queen Telepath, even tho he was born in the Skywing Kingdom. (This will be touched on in his Backstory)
Telepath is a good name for a NightWing, assuming that she is a NightWing. If not, then, uh...
Abilities: Well, he's super strong, but not unbelievably strong because of the two tribes he is a mix of.
Super strong? Oi. I don't think a hybrid would be "super strong". Maybe he could be of medium strength? Like, he's stronger than the average SkyWing but weaker than the average NightWing?
He can fly fast and due to his colouring, he can camouflage with his home in the nights of his redwood forest.
Okay, fair.
Rank: Outcast/ and Student
Ok, cool. Outcast is a bit cliché, but it's alright.
Appearance:
He is a large-necked muscular dragon with deep-red scales and slightly lighter red underscales. He also has the starry pattern, like a Nightwing, on his nose, horns and under his wings. Has a silver moon charmed necklace given to him by his mother.
What about his height, though? Is he chubby? Skinny? Eye color? Maybe he has some scars or accessories? A bit more detail wouldn't hurt.
Personality:
- Trust Issues (He judges dragons by their names. If he finds a dragon with the name (example) Glory, he'll assume that they've done something great in life. He thinks names are given for a foreshadowing reason.)
Now I want him to meet Chameleon and see what he thinks lmao...
-Aggressive (This is a result of his trust issues)
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WoF OC Reviews
RandomWings of Fire OC Reviews! Not my original idea. (If you don't know what OCs are, they are "Original Characters") Also, yes, I'm aware - there are about two thousand of these kinds of books. I know. And probably nobody's going to see this book.
