Hey guys so I've been thinking about getting feedback on the story so basically just any analysis you guys have any criticisms so just comment on each. Please comment, go into as much detail as you guys want! I LOVE reading your guy's comments. I truly mean it when I say hearing what you guys have to say makes my day.
1) characterization of existing characters and their relationships with y/n
2) Y/ns character, do you guys like her personality and backstory. Is there any traits you guys think would suit her? Any quirks or little gimmicks she might have?
3) plot/flow do you guys think the story is at a good pace and is it too slow or too fast lemme know.
4) just random or other things I haven't covered
Thank you guys so much for everything and I encourage comments because I love interacting with you guys. I started writing this my freshman year of high school and I'm soon ending my junior year, I am so happy to see how far the story has come and to see so many people reading it. I've never truly connected with people on something I'm so passionate about and to see that other people like it too makes me feel like I'm not alone. Thank you everyone~
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Me, strays, and some old dude (Fukuzawa x adoptive daughter reader)
FanfictionY/n is an average 13-year-old girl. She was average and so was her life. Too average, life was boring. It was the same routine every day. That was until she decided to pet some strays in front of a certain building. Female pronouns she/her
