Okay, I kinda just got this idea as I sat up in my bed right now, but have you noticed most books on here leave out little slice of life details?
Now, they aren't a requirement, but I think they make a story more enjoyable sometimes.
The character is almost always doing swell with no medical issues (generally unless their story is of them with a medical problem), but did you know not everyone is A okay in life?
I'll use myself as an example.
I get sinus problems every fall. I have scoliosis (pretty sure most Americans have it nowadays) thanks to genetics. I have a blood pressure condition where it looks like a healthy low, but can drop a lot. And I have seasonal allergies.
Now, I do have some mental things (anxiety, ADD, etc) but those aren't going to be really my focus here in this rant.
Just where the hell is the sore neck? If a character is Doug something that causes neck strain, then they should get a sore neck.
They slept in a strange position? Give them neck pain and back pain.
Stub their toe? Make them exaggerate a limp for the temporary pain.
They have sugar problems? Maybe they are making sure they're not diabetic yet. (But research it, even here I may have not said it right.)
Maybe they have acid reflex. Have them do the weird multiple burps when drinking a soda.
All I'm saying is please make the story have little things like this if possible. It adds more uniqueness in my opinion and can make the story a bit more fun.
It isn't for everyone, I know, but try it and it could make a story better.
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Rants: The Things That Piss Me Off On Wattpad
HumorJust things that peeve me off here on Wattpad and things in general. Instead of filling my tip book with rants, I'll put them here so they don't clutter up space I could be putting writing advice. Note: If you're easily offended, don't read.