Here I give my opinion on my favorite characters and their relationship with others both as friends and some possible foreseen covers some of these will include fanfiction stories not just show characters of all fandoms not just Sofia the First
5 more examples of other Bad Dialogues and why they don't work and when they don't work and when they could work and why and how they do work in certain places.
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1st type of Bad Dialogue is Name Calling
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1st issue is Characters are addressing each other too often by first name. 2nd point is sounds super awkward nobody repeats each other's first name that often in real dialogue. 3rd issue is that it hurts the pacing of the conversation and that hurts the current pace of the story. 4th issue Unnecessary unless you are trying to get someone's attention or are trying to make a point. In others world the very Name addressing name calling has to make it into a punchline during a conversation to be considered appropriate dialogue in the latter sense of the option.
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