Relationships & Partners and Writing Skills Tips. (A Writing Advice Guide Book

Continuation of What It Means To Annotate: Examples Below P6

Please do not copy the diary entries. They belong to the author, I would not be sharing any of them if I did not purposefully comment and respond to almost every other sentence. And FYI STARTING AT P9 of the annotation the book is not for the age group below high-school as there are really dark stuff coming up. Unless you use it as a model to write your own example of annotation or a challenging writing prompt to follow NEVER COPY IT EVER. I will never put this book in stores or on another website either. This is a solo Wattpad story only and only exists for the convenience of those who wish to catch onto several writing skills and practiced them, Skylights, when they have no resources to use and accessibly provide themselves off line. I don't want any money for it and I don't want popularity for it. It is just a simple gift to less fortunate than me and to me them being able to read this is satisfying enough. It is enough for me that readers will want to read it.

You, however,  may quote whatever annotations I have stated that you find make a very good lesson and point I will allow that. I quote people all the time. And I will be listing several quotes from the story in these chapters to come up later because they are really good to quote, my friends.

13th Diary entry annotated
Monday evenin'
The last meal of the day is over and all the dishes is washed. (14 words in the sentence)
I'm so tired! (3 words within the sentence)
"You don't know what tired is," Aunt Tee told me. "Be glad you aine got to work the fields."  (19 words make up the last two sentences) (True nothing is as tiring for anybody as much as the field workers do so major hard labor in the fields they tire out real fast by the end of the day. I cain't demagine bein' tireder than I am now. (9 words within sentence) I wondered did Wook and Aggie go to bed feelin' sick-tired like me? (14 words within sentence. I believe their beds are probably damp with all the sweat they'd have dripping off the bodies after coming home from hard labors out in the fields, Skylights. So their sleeping probably wasn't go or regular with that muggy feeling always around.)

14th entry Diary annotated
Day or two later
There's just enough light to practice my writin'. (8 words within sentence)
Freedom is one of the first words I teached myself to write. (12 words within the last sentence) Down in the Quarters people pray for freedom — they sing 'bout freedom, but to keep Mas' Henley from knowin' their true feelings, they call freedom "heaven".  (26 words within sentence, as I said previously one way or another God makes it possible for him to be heard by the oppressed and blinds the eyes and ears of those who believes they have succeeded in keeping people silent even behind their backs. There was always a way in Slave Quarters on plantations where secrets thrived between each worker and they had secret codes to make sure they never mentioned anything dangerous when on site with the Master in sight of them. There are ways to keep a dangerous secret as proven in this book and the author's writing of the character of Clotee every one of the slaves are more likely to have each other's backs. Especially the Kitchen workers if the Big House as is demonstrated in next chapter.) Everybody's mind is on freedom. (5 words within a sentence)
But it is a word that aine never showed me no picture. (12 words within sentence, I can say me I have never had a reason to want freedom because I've always been free livin' my life in the United States. So like her I don't have a good picture of freedom either. To me it's just a word too. So does the word "freedom" have magic to you? What does it make you think, feel and see deep down in your heart?! I only know the freedom my Paternal Great Grandfather experience by narrowly escaping having to serve in the Germany army when living in Poland because some Polander gave away his visa and enabled my relative to leave for the United States. That is really the only personal family legacy freedom means to my family deep down in my heart, precious Skylights?) While fannin' this afternoon, my eyes fell on "freedom" in a book William was readin'. (15 words within sentence) No wonder I don't see nothin'. (6 words within the past sentence) I been spelling' it f-r-e-e-d-u-m. (5 words within the last sentence)
I put the right letters in my head to make sure I remember their place. (15 words within sentence) F-R-E-E-D-O-M. I just now wrote it. (6 words made up the last two sentences.) Still no picture. (3 words within the last sentence) (What is the freedom you are picturing now?!)
Nothin'. The letters just sit there on the page. (9 words within sentence) Spelled right or wrong, freedom got no picture, no magic. (10 words within sentence) (What magic does Freedom have for you my fellow writers? Please do engage and comment here answers to these annotated questions I wanted to know your answers, people. It helps me diversify my fan fictions even more if you reach out with a constructive opinions, Skylights." Freedom is just a word. (5 words within sentence)