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The requestor is looking for advice on revising an application essay.
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It seems quite important, so be sure to reread it and check for any mistakes. See if you are missing any necessary information, and add said information if needed. If you are worried about repetition, feel free to use a thesaurus or look up synonyms for words. Afterwards, ask your parents what they think. Consider their opinions, and make the changes that you agree with.
You can also ask a teacher or a counselor from your school to review the essay. As before, consider their opinions in revision. If you think that an opinion doesn't match your thinking, you are not obliged to make changes. Don't forget your overall vision for the essay.
We thank you for sending in your concern. I hope the application goes well. Good luck!
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