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Hello everyone

Please give a quick opinion honestly?

Are you all finding my writing annoying now? Am I not able to show things and their understanding properly between Avneil?

I am an over thinker and a reader has given her honest opinion which I respect a lot.

So can you all tell me honestly whether I am annoying you all with this story now?
To be honest, I don't write intimate scene very often, so are you all finding this thing annoying?

Please give your honest answer and also tell me what should I improve so that I can improve my writing.

Please I won't mind if you all give your honest feedback, I will improve things if I am writing poorly.

Thank you



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