Are you looking for a place where somebody will review your story honestly? Where they talk and let you know how well your story will do when it comes to reads? Then, welcome to my blunt reviews. This is where I will take your story and break it dow...
Thoughts:I will say this once, and I'll repeat it: I don't care who agrees with me or doesn't agree with. When it comes to YouTube videos, I'm not a big fan of them because when I am reviewing a story, the video doesn't stop playing. Regardless of how many times I pause it. So it's just a big turn-off to the whole story. That being said, I like the story so far. It is a cute story that needs some editing, and some things are confusing because I didn't know I was reading it from a male's point of view instead of a female's. It is not the biggest deal. It's cute. It makes me smile because you can see similarities between the two that are on the train. And that's very interesting. I like that character development. It definitely is an original story. I'm used to the first Hey oh my God, I found love type stories. This is not that at all, and you can see that you can see that you know they disagree about the seats that they are supposed to be in. You can see that their characters are slowly developing into the atmosphere. Into the story. I appreciate things like that because if you do not build your character your character does not develop throughout the story. The Story begins to lose interest to your readers. So this story is very well thought out. You can tell that the author put a lot of thought into making this story. To me, I feel like I'm reading a journal, and I love that. They kind of fight a like they're an old married couple. It's very small things that they bicker about.
Thank you for letting me review your story. 📚
🪷A. D🪷
Percentage:90
Chapter I read:3
Recommend yes/ no? Yes
Summary of book
There are moments in our life, when we meet someone and we feel as if we have known them all our life.
One such exquisite connection sparked between two strangers, Karthik and Priya in a span of fourteen hours.
What happens when they meet again? In an unexpected event, of course!
HE : (∂ + m) ψ = 0
SHE : Dopamine + Serotonin + Oxytocin = LOVE
Wondering what these equations mean?
Dive in, to witness the Physics vs Chemistry Match!!! 😉
AUTHORS WARNING
Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they can not be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.
🪷A.D🪷
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