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The way that the author does this story is, without a doubt, beautifully written. I think when it comes to creativity, they use certain words a little bit too much, and I feel like they don't need to, but besides that, I feel like the story by itself is really sad and broken but beautiful at the same time, just because of the way that the author does do the story and how sad it is because of what the character is truly going through.
Originality:15 /15
I don't think that's quite bad. Anything like this story definitely is different when it comes to originality, but the way that the author does it is so unique in a way that you're surprised by how interesting it is, but you also like the moment with the story. Takes you and a whole different atmosphere. It takes you on this roller coaster of emotions and adventure, and you don't get to go on that roller coaster a lot with stories. She definitely go on it with this one.
Storytelling: 15/15
The storytelling is out of this world amazing. The way that's author brings you into their world is so stunning. Starts off slow, but that isn't a bad thing. I do feel like when it comes to the storytelling; they put the prolog in the first chapter together for me; I think they should put that separately. The readers, for me at least as a reader, got confused. Storytelling is still beautifully written. It still brings you into this world of adventure, mystery of wonder. Sorrow: there's a lot that this main character goes through, but they still keep their composure, and that is saying a lot. I love this story and the way that the author has created this world.
Character: 15/15
The uniqueness of the main character is what I love makes them see this story because he goes through so much and still ends up having a smile on his face regardless of what he's going through. To me, that is so lovely and so sad at the same time because even though he wants to be accepted, he knows that because his species is considered a monster, he will never fit in, but that doesn't stop him from working hard and being the very best he can be I love the characters I love how unique they are and how they have life in them. They're going to go through every obstacle regardless and figure it out.
Story Flows: 10/15
Sit at the bottom, and you can see a little stiff of what I've taken from chapter 2 in the chapter. This doesn't sound accurate. This doesn't sound right. Serene was lost in thought, contemplating her situation. Are you kidding me? She's that to herself, of course. Anyone would be afraid of you even though you look like a human, but you are a monster, and now I have to stay with you. How can I not be? you need to take away am, And then the sentence would sound better. It should say something like Serena was lost in thought, contemplating her situation. Are you kidding me? She thought to herself. Of course, even though you look like a human, anyone would be afraid of you, but you are a monster, and now I have to stay with you. How can I not be even when it comes to the human part you put? Even though you look like a human, but you are a monster. You could even go as far as saying because that doesn't even sound right. Even though you look like a human, you are not human. You are a monster. Other than that, everything else in the rest of the chapter sounded really well. They flowed very nicely, and there was nothing else.
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Cover Design: 15/15
The cover, along with the story, fit perfectly. They complement each other beautifully.
Final Thoughts:10 /10
Ultimately, I think the stories are very beautiful, and the way they are authored makes them unique and interesting to read. It has that moment of a roller coaster because of the way that the main character is going through what he's going through, but at the same time, you know that he's going to overcome everything that he is going through. So at the end of the day, regardless, he's going to Overcome everything, and that's what I love about the story is that it takes a character and his struggles and makes him stronger because of it, they should be really proud of their work it was amazing to read.
Chapters I read:3
Total points:95
Summary of the book:
This is the story of a young boy whose name is Johnny O'Conner who was born as a monster, yet outwardly appears human. Due to his monster race he was hated by everyone and no one accepted him the way he was but still there were some people in his life who showed him kindness. He embarks on a journey to become the strongest being in the universe, driven by his desire to protect both the universe and his loved ones. However, despite his immense power, he often finds himself failing to safeguard his friends and others. Johnny is caring and really kind but after losing his loved ones time to time watching them die infront of his eyes he starts to gets cold and he always walks on dark side, even though he's nice. Due to his incredible abilities, he becomes a target for the villain Perseus. Perseus was sealed by Omegamon, the strongest Magician, but then he was revived by his monster generals using dark magic. Perseus became a threat to the universe. Johnny was extremely powerful, and he was the only one who could defeat Perseus. For that matter, every monster started targeting him and his friends and loved ones in order to kill Johnny. Nevertheless, Johnny refuses to give up and continues to persevere. But even so, he still occasionally fails to protect his loved ones. Throughout his journey, he encounters numerous sorrows, loneliness, and adventures, facing challenges from various worlds.Author's note :- This book is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to entities, events, or persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. All characters, places, planets, and events are imaginary and any similarity to real people. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are a product of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual entities, events, locations or persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental."
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