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Amongst the Waking Dreams

Creativity:15 /15

The story is such a beautiful story, so when it's author to say. Fairies. It was so beautiful. You get the whole picture of Faye and how they are. The author is not disappointed when it comes to what Faye does, how Faye is, and things like that. The author doesn't look extremely good at describing them and how they can be manipulative and twist things around. It's beautiful. The story is beautiful.

Originality:15 /15

I don't think I've read a story quite like this one, and. the imagination that the author puts into this story and the details and everything that makes the story just beautiful. I've not read a Faye story in a long time, and it's really hard for me to like many stories about Fay and mythical creatures. The reason is that a lot of people overdo them. This author doesn't overdo it. This author does a beautiful amount of information about Faye, and that's what I can appreciate.

Storytelling:15 /15

I loved the storytelling. I felt like you were in a different world, sitting there with the Fay, realizing the struggle is that these poor moral girls have because they're not Faye. And then you get to the point with the boys and how they treat them. It is so beyond beautiful. Let me tell you, I enjoyed the storytelling, and you could literally see through everybody's eyes and you could literally feel what everyone was feeling. The author did not disappoint.

Character: 15/15

the characters were out of the park. The author did the characters in an amazing way. You could see the struggle that the mortal girls were having. But you could also see the friendships that t So I really loved it. The younger Faye had with the mortal girls. They were her people, but God. as if she was faye and they were not she. Still cared for them because, at the end of the day, if I'm correct, she's the one who went into the water to save her friend, and she was not happy that the boys had done what they did to her, And I get it. She's mortal. Their Faye. But that did not give them the right to do what they did to her. And her friend could see them. And her friend was not happy about that. So, the dynamics of the friendship I loved. But you could also see how jealous the boys were because they had that powerful friendship.

Story Flows: 15/15

I didn't see anything wrong with the sentence structure at all or any grammar errors. Everything flowed very nicely, and everything ran together smoothly.

Cover Design: 15/15

She loved the cover. I felt like the cover does fit the story very well.

Final Thoughts:10 /10

At the end of the day, the other should be very proud of the work that we have created, even though it's a short story, because they really did hate the time to really get into every character's mindset and they were able to show that through their story, they were able to see that the story and the characters needed. Each other, like you can't just write a story and not expect your characters to have some feeling, some kind of emotion, things like that. If your characters don't have emotion, if there's no drama, if there's nothing like that in a story, it's not going to come across to your audience, and it's going to fall flat, especially it dealing with mythical creatures, even if it was like a creature or a powerful bean. They need that. Acknowledgment: they need to know their emotions and everything going on with them. You can show it on paper, And this author did it. They showed all the emotions. They showed all the details. They showed all of the expressions. They showed everything that you need to see, even when it came to her father figure. When she went into his office, you could tell that certain details that the author showed her that he loved her, regardless of whether she was his or not. The office was warm and cozy. And she loved to go to it. At the end of the day, you know that he did that for her. It wasn't because he was cold. It was because it made her comfortable. He. did things for her and her. Showed her the love that nobody else would. And that's lovely, just like her friendship. So, the author did a good job portraying everything and ensuring everything fit perfectly in the store. You could feel the emotions, and everything was phenomenal. Phenomenal. Once again, this is another story that doesn't have a lot of votes or comments but needs to be recognized for its beauty.

Chapters I read:3

Total points:100

Summary of the book:

Nymeria Verne has always loved fantasy books. She loves the mystical lands, the fantastical creatures, the happy fairy tale endings...but what she loves most about them is that they are nothing like the real thing. Nymeria was raised in the land of faeries, constantly visiting the mortal realm with its urban cities but never understanding them. As a human living among fae, she has grown up always knowing that she is not pretty enough, not strong enough, not ever enough-for who could compare to the ethereal fae? She doesn't belong among either the faeries or the humans, and yet she loves her home and is desperate to find her place among the Seelie Courts. Despite the beauty and draw of the faerie world, there is a sinister undertone to it, and Nymeria knows that she can never be safe as a fragile human there. Not even her strenuous relationship with the faerie she refuses to call 'father' could help her. Her only chance of security and belonging is to one day come of age and become a faerie's bride, but at seventeen years old Nymeria refuses to accept marriage as the only option. In her search for her own path and independence, she stumbles across a prince of fae that offers all the solutions to her problems. She becomes his servant and agrees to spy for him in return for protection and a place in his court when he becomes High King. As a mortal, Nymeria can do something the fae can't: lie-a trait that the prince sees an opportunity in. Along the way, she meets a mortal boy, Collin, that was raised among fae just as she was. As her reluctant feelings for him grow, he has her questioning her choices and what it is she actually wants. Perhaps leaving the land of fae would be her better option...But her prince has no intention of letting her go.

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