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Creativity:15 /15 I find that the creativity in the story is outstanding. I love the Friendship and how the author wrote this story. It's sad but good at the same time.
Originality: /15 I definitely think there is originality there. I think it's more of the Friendship than she loves him per se. I love their Friendship, and I hope it continuously blossoms.
Storytelling: 15/15 I find that the storytelling is very different. It's love, but it's also a friendship, and you're not sure how it will end up, but it's a good thing it's like you get to see her life unravel, and his life's unravel as well, and they try to figure out everything together.
Character: 15/15 I actually love the characters, and I love how well they connect to each other. I can relate to the girl well because I feel like she's going through a lot with her feelings and reconnecting with her best friend, but he also doesn't know how to act around her.
Story Flows: 15/15 I think the story feels very nicely. There are no grammar errors. I didn't see anything that sounded off. Everything sounded and flowed very nicely.
Cover Design:10 /15 I like the cover, but I'm not in love with it. I feel like the cover still does not represent the story as it should.
Final Thoughts: 10/10 At the end of the day, I think the story is really good, but the cover needs a little work. I think the author needs to find a cover that either represents more of the guy or more of the girl or have them both together. But all in all, this story is terrific, and I can't wait to see what the future holds.
Chapters I read:3
Total points: 95
Summary of the book:
"Yeppuda!" my baby brother, Max, exclaimed, clapping his tiny hands and bouncing with excitement as he plopped onto my lap. I chuckled, attempting to calm him down. "What did you teach him this time, Jackson?" I shifted my attention from Max, who was playfully tugging at my hair, to Jackson, whose gaze was locked with mine. "What?" I inquired, feeling a delightful flutter in my stomach. "Yeppuda," he replied, his smile growing wider. "And what does that mean?" I asked, my mind muddled by the unfamiliar word. "It means... pretty," he revealed, his words causing my heart to skip a beat. "Pretty Mia," he murmured, and my situation suddenly felt a little bit better. Should I just ditch Ethan?
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