Blunt Reviews

"Divine Reckoning: Mahabharata's Resurgence in Kaliyuga"

Creativity: 5/15

I will be honest, and I don't say this to be mean or malicious. These are my thoughts, and other people might have different opinions, and that's okay.. for me, there was not much creativity when it came to this story. For me, the beginning was very basic. And it just went over each child. It doesn't really get into the story until you get to the second chapter, and even then, there's no real adventure. There's no real interest when it comes to the story. It's just kind of bland, period. To me, it's not going anywhere in the. The farther you get into the story, the more I wait for that mischief; I wait for that storytelling. I wait for something that really goes. Wow. And to be honest, I didn't get that. I feel like the story was dragging on, but there was no storyline.

Originality: 15/15

There was originality when it came to this story. It was definitely a story that I have not read before. but the originality. Was just how the story was made. It wasn't like something that popped or something that you were like, oh, this is definitely a different type of story. This is something that I would want to read. This is something that is interesting. Not saying that the story was completely boring because, once again, I'm not meant to be mean. But it wasn't popping. It wasn't something that made me think this could go far in the end. For me, the thing that got me was the prologue in the beginning. Half the things in the prologue. I don't understand because they're in a different language. And there is nothing like translations. There's nothing. So I can understand. So, right there, that threw me off. As far as once again originality, having a different language is always amazing. But for your readers who don't speak that language, it's nice to translate so they can get a feel of the story.

Storytelling: 5/15

Once again, it was not meant to be mean, but there really wasn't storytelling. I couldn't get the feel of what type of storytelling they were trying to convince.

Character:15 /15

Characters seemed interesting, but I couldn't connect with them again because there was. Really wasn't a lot about them. There was a lot about them in the first chapter, but that to felt more like an introduction to each character. And that's something that I really don't need. I want to meet the characters in the story. I don't want an introduction to them and how they're important to the story. I want to know the characters in the story. I want the story to really be brought to life. And with this, it just did it to it for me.

Story Flows: 15/15

The story flowed very well. I didn't see any grammar errors. I didn't see anything that was out of place. I didn't see anything that didn't sound like it shouldn't be there. Everything in the sentences. And the story ran. Smoothly.

Cover Design: 10/15

I think the cover in the story made sense.

Final Thoughts: 10/10

At the end of the day, these are my opinions. I did not feel like the YouTube video was necessarily meant to be there once again. I read from my tablet, and sometimes it is very hard to turn off YouTube videos. Example. Right now, I'm reading a story a beautiful story, but there are a lot of YouTube videos, and because of that, it's so hard to read me because I have to pause it and make sure that each YouTube video stays paused. Same thing here. YouTube videos are super hard. to pause when you're reading them on a tablet. Another thing that I will say is I didn't connect with any of the characters. The story didn't feel like a story to me. It just wasn't flowing. It wasn't a story. It was more of an introduction, and it was very slow. So, this is a story I probably would not continue to read just because I can't get into it. And if I can't get into a story, I'm not going to continue to read it. That goes with any story I'm reading. At the end of the day, these are just my opinions. They are not meant to be mean or malicious. They are my brutally honest opinions about the story.

Chapters I read:3

Total points:75

Summary of the book:

"In the dance of time, where dharma wavers, the eternal protector orchestrates the cosmic play, guiding souls through the shadows towards the light of righteousness."In the tapestry of time, where destinies entwine,Krishna's flute whispers, a melody divine.Through the ages, characters unfold,Stories of courage, of silver and gold.In the heart of Kali, where shadows breed,Mahabharata's children plant virtue's seed.Devi's journey veiled, a celestial art,A dance of destiny, a soulful part.Arrogance and malice, like tempests wild,Yet within, a spark, of the divine child.Krishna, with powers untold,A saga of redemption, in tales unfold.Past concealed, a cosmic game,Mahabharata's legacy, reclaims its name.Through the echoes of time, a dharma's song,In the dance of destiny, we all belong.

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