Luminaries

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Creativity:15 /15

At the end of the day, I think the way that the author writes this story is phenomenal. When it comes to the story is so out of the park ridiculously awesome that you're not sure if you're actually reading a book or watching a movie. Honestly say that because at the end of the day, I was literally listening to the book read to me, and I forgot it was actually reading a book. I thought I was watching a movie until my tablet yelled at me that I needed to charge it. That creativity of the story will blow your mind like 100% will blow your mind when you start reading this story. Will just be like, wait, what the heck.


Originality: 15/15

The originality: I just can't read this author the way this story is formulated. I feel like the author took a good couple of years to figure out this story because you can literally watch this story in your head. It is so detailed and so descriptive that it is just stunning. I don't understand why they're not getting the perfect reads in stories like this and others I've read. Why aren't people reading stories? Like, I don't know how to critique a story that's pretty much perfect, and that's what this story is. The way that the author has created such a fantastic story, I have no words. You go and look at all the reviews I've done. It takes a lot for me to be speechless. And I am 100% speechless with this story and how well-written and thought out it is.

Storytelling: 15/15

I would love to read more of this author's work. The storytelling is perfect, but I don't know how to critique a story like this. Because of the way that the author has written it, there's nothing wrong with it. Everything is so out of the park and beautiful. The details, the events, and the characters like it will blow your mind. There are a lot of stories out there that have blown my mind, but oh my god, this author has so much talent.

Character:15 /15

They once again, I don't know what to say. Please list the characters nothing wrong with them; I can connect with all the characters. the characters are beautifully written, well thought out detailed everything like I don't even know why this author asked for a review. At the end of the day, their story is perfect. and I don't say that a lot, and I don't mean to be rude. I hope it doesn't come off as rude. But I see nothing wrong with their story.

Story Flows: 15/15

I didn't see anything wrong with it when it came to the grammar. Everything flowed very nicely. All the sentences, the structure, and everything else were perfect. I didn't see anything wrong; I didn't see anything out of place. Everything flowed very nicely.

Cover Design: 15/15

The cover is beautiful. It fits the story. There's nothing wrong with the cover. The cover and the story complement each other very well.

Final Thoughts: 10/10

At the end of the day, I don't think the author really needs any reviews if I'm going, to be honest; the win that the author writes the story and the win that the story is going to is perfect. I don't see anything wrong with the story from a reader's point of view. It really keeps you intrigued. It wants you to go back to the story; it makes you contemplate what's going on in the story. It really makes you guess everything that's going on in the story. It's like a movie that just never stops; when it does stop, you want to know if there's more of the movie. The story was very intriguing. It brought me in from the very first chapter and was ongoing like it never stopped, making me want to read it. In fact, there were times when I wasn't sure if I was reading a story or watching a movie because of the story's way. It's almost like you are watching a movie inside your head but reading the story simultaneously, which is beautiful. there were times I had to stop doing what I was doing because I honestly thought I was watching a movie, and I didn't want to be like oh my goodness, I'm going to miss something in the movie. The story's phenomenal, like the story, is 100 percent phenomenal, and it takes a lot for me to be speechless, but with this story, I am 100 percent speechless. I do not know how to critique such a great story. It is perfection

Chapters I read: 3 

Total points:  100

Summary of the book: 

In which a group of vigilantes take up the mantle as a divided city's protectors.Because who better to entrust with the safety of an entire populace of people than a couple of sleep deprived, magically empowered teenagers?-or-A group of teenage vigilantes attempt to restore the public's faith in their magically endowed race, fending off villains as they rise to power and bring fear to the streets of Discon. However, all of their efforts and progress fall into jeopardy in tandem with the safety of the rest of the city with the rise of an extremist group led by a mysterious and all-powerful leader.

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