Blunt Reviews

Crown Of Spells

Creativity: 15/15
The way that the story represents itself is positively brilliant. Let me explain the story's creativity and how the author does the story. It reminds me a lot of the book I'm writing. The only difference is in the world this author has created; if you're not royalty, you have no magic. And to me, the way that they represent this is stunning.

Originality:15 /15
This story is a story I've never read, both in how the story is told and in the representation of the story. It is, without a doubt, unique. It's delightful to read. As a reader, it brings you in and makes you want to know what will happen next.

Storytelling: 15/15
When reading the story, I felt like I was in the character's body, living through her. She wants to do what the nobles do; she wants to be able to use magic. She wants to be able to compete in what they do. But what gets me is the beginning of the prologue; that's what got me that brought me it.

Character:15 /15
The character is very headstrong, and I love that in this story. She knows what she wants, and regardless of whether her aunt wants her to have it, she will definitely go for it. And that's a double-edged sword for her because, ultimately, she's going against her aunt's will to make her dreams come true.

Story Flows:15 /15
I didn't see anything wrong with the story. Everything flowed very nicely. I did not know any grammar mistakes; none of the sentences seemed out of place, and every sentence read very well. The structure of the story was solid. Nothing made me say, "Oh, this isn't sounding right. Everything sounded right. Everything flowed smoothly

Cover Design:15 /15
I don't know who did this cover, but it fits the story and is such a beautiful cover.

Final Thoughts: 10/10
Once again, the only issue I have is the prologue. The prologue was too long and felt like a chapter over a prologue. I always tell people that when it comes to a prologue it's supposed to be short and simple something to bring the readers in but not so long that it feels like a chapter. Besides that, the story was a fantastic story to read

Chapters I read: prologue and two chapters

Total points:  100

Summary of the book:

Her whole life Delsia's been called ordinary, despite the pulsing power in her veins and the intricate gold tattoo on her back. Unbeknownst to Delsia, she possesses extraordinary magical abilities that hints at a destiny far greater than she could ever imagine. As she explores her past, she discovers she is, in fact, the long-lost princess of Veridian. However, the cruel and power-hungry , Ruby, currently sits on the throne, having seized power after the mysterious disappearance of the royal family. Having no way to prove herself, Delsia joins the legendary Divination Tournament-an annual competition where young sorcerers showcase their magical prowess, with the winner receiving a wish granted by the royal family. With the tournament acting as a guise to find the next great sorceress, Delsia realizes this is her chance to show the world who she is... and shake the kingdom at it's core with her secrets.Note from AuthorThis my first story I published so I hope you find it interesting! I would love to hear your feedback, opinions and thoughts! Once again thank you for taking your time and reading it!

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Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they can not be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.

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