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Creativity:15 /15 This is interesting. Even though it's a fanfiction, it doesn't feel like a fanfiction the way that the author does it. And the creativity of this is so unique that, to me, I feel like I'm reading a typical story. I don't feel like I'm reading fanfiction, which is incredible. Some Fanfictions depend strongly on who they're obsessing about, whether a singer, an actor, or a fictional character. Sometimes, fan fiction goes overboard. But this one does not. This feels like a standard mystery story.
Originality:15 /15 I give the author a lot of props for what they've done with this Story because it's so unique and exciting to read that it just drags you in and makes you want to stay to find out what's going on. It's not one of those stories that you get bored quickly with. It's a story with so much mystery that you're on the edge of your seat, wanting to know who killed her because nobody does at the end of the day. And that's what makes this Story so phenomenal.
Storytelling:15 /15 I feel like I'm sitting there watching this mystery unfold, pointing to who I think the killer actually is. But knowing that I'm probably in the wrong and just waiting to get another hint to see if I can guess who it is, that's how I feel about storytime. I feel like I'm sitting there trying to solve it myself. Like I'm the detective trying to solve a story. So it brings your readers in and wants them to keep reading because they need to know who the killer is.
Character:15 /15 I'm unsure if I can connect with the characters, but in this aspect, you don't need to connect with them. Are there characters that I don't like? Yes, 100% there are several characters in the Story that I can't stand. But that's a good thing because that tells you that your readers can at least connect with those they don't like. There are some I can't stand, and that's okay, but I sympathize with others. So, I might not be able to connect with the characters, but I can at least emotionally understand what they're doing and what they're going through, so that's a good thing, and the characters are unforgettable.
Story Flows: 15/15 I didn't see anything wrong regarding the Story and its structure. Everything sounded well. The Story flowed very nicely. Each sentence slowed very nicely. I didn't see anything out of place, which made me go. This doesn't sound right. Everything sounded fine. Everything flowed very well, and everything made the Story beautiful.
Cover Design:15 /15 I find that the cover is charming, and it goes well with the Story.
Final Thoughts:10 /10 I don't find anything wrong with this Story. I don't feel like it is fan fiction; it's a typical story that is good. As I said, fanfiction can get heavy, and people even obsess over certain characters, certain singers, and certain fictional characters—even actors. But for me, the Story did not do that. It didn't obsess. It was very well written. The author has a fantastic story here, which they should be proud of because it is hard to make a fanfiction that feels more like a typical story than an obsessive one. I think this author did well with that. It's a story that I would put in my library. And I'm not a big fanfiction person. I wouldn't say I like fanfiction because I've read so many where they obsess over a singer, actress, or fictional character. But I would put this Story in my library to read more of. So, with that being said, the author should be honored because I don't put fanfiction in my library at all, but I will be putting this one in my library to read more of.
Chapters I read: Prologue and three chapters
Total points: 100
Summary of the book:
"But I am the one who killed her!" "No,it was me!""Wait...so you're telling me that all of us tried to kill Vivre?"In which a girl name Vivre dies due to unknown causes and a group of teenagers are confused about which one of them killed her.
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